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The bar chart compares the numbers of male and female in terms of 4 categories of evening leisure classes in an education center for adult people in 2009, while the given pie chart shows data on the ages of those people taking part in those courses.
Overall, the figures for women were higher than those of man in almost courses, with a notable exception for sculpture class. We also can see that those courses were much more popular among older adults.
The bar chart depicts that 40 was the number of women taking up evening language class, which was twice as much as that for men in the year of 2009. Besides, both genders spent their least attention on sculpture course, with 10 men and perhaps 5 women. In the same year, Female paid more their passion on painting rather than drama course, with 30 people and 20 people respectively. Similarly, the numbers of men participating in painting and drama class in an adult center were simultaneously below 30 people, with nearly 23 individuals and 10 individuals, in turn.
As can be seen from the pie chart, while the percentage of those participants aged below 20 years old had 5%, which was nearly half as much as that of 20-to-29-year-olds (with 11%). Furthermore, 42% was the ratio for both genders aging 50 years old and older, making it become the largest segment in average ages. It is also noted that more 40-to-49-year-old partakers joining those courses in that center than a younger group of 30-39-year-olds, a different of 10%.

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Please take a look at my correction. Feel free to leave your comments!

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Hi guy, firstly, thanks for fixing my mistakes. That’s very kind of you! But I think you had some confuses about my mistakes. According to Mr. Simon ( a famous teacher, I think that U also know about him), a group of 20-to-29-year-olds = a group of 20-to-29-year-old people . This grammar I studied from him, therefore you can check it again. anyway, Thank you for your kindness again.