• Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

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      August 17, 2017 at 5:34 pm

      The given table compares 5 different countries such France, Germany, the UK, Turkey and Spain in terms of 4 categories of household expenditure every month.
      Overall, while the percentage of housing costs holds the first rank in simultaneous nations France, German and UK, citizens in other countries spend their most budget on food and drink.
      It is noticeable that 37% was the proportion of housing expenditure in the UK, which was slightly 4% and 6% higher than that in France and Germany, respectively. French, German and British locals, in turn, spend 25%, 22% 27% monthly expenses on food and drink, besides, those citizens just pour least money on clothing every month, at 7%, 15% and 11% respectively. In the UK, total expenditure is allocated for entertainment with 11%, that figure in similarity for Germany is 19% and for French is 13%.
      The table also depicts that food and drink is by far the main means of household costs in two remaining nations Spain and Turkey, with a similar pattern 31% and 36%, in turn. Whereas, the ratio of clothing is the lowest in average expenditure every month in those countries in addition the figure for Turkey is 12%, which was higher than that in Spain (with 8%). In Spain, the average of wages is paid for housing costs at 20% which was twice as much as that of entertainment. Similarly, the ratio for housing is 18% and that for entertainment expenses is precisely 15% in Turkey.

      The given table compares the five most popular nations in terms of the number of annual worldwide tourism and the money spent by those in the period of two years.
      Overall, the number of visitors as well as the money they pour money on this activity in 2013 was almost higher than those of precious year, with a notable exception of China.
      The table depicts that France was by far the most famous destination in both years 2012 and 2013, in turn, with 83 million and 84.7 million tourism. Besides, the USA, Spain and Italy witnessed a slightly increase in the number of international visitors, with a jump of around 3 million, from 66.7 million, 57.5 million and 46.4 million in 2012, respectively; however, the figures for China showed a downward trend in tourists, a decrease by 2 million after one following year. (with 57.7 million in 2012).
      It is also noted that the number in millions consumed by oversea tourists in top 5 nations simultaneously went up from 2012 to 2013. Furthermore, traditional travelers poured the highest money on visiting to the USA in both years, with 126.2 and 139.6 billion units, respectively, while the budget expanded for Italy just was ranged from 41.2 to 43.9 billion. In 2012, the money which visitors paid their income for travelling to France, Spain and China were above 50 billion, with 53.6, 56.3 and 50 billion dollars respectively additionally one years later, those figures in three nations slightly rose by 2.5 billion, 7.1 billion and 1.7 billion, in turn.

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      Participant
      August 17, 2017 at 5:43 pm

      I apologise to you for my unexpected mistake. I forgot to split 2 exercises before handing in my essay. Therefore, u can fix whatever essays you want. Sorry for this inconvenience. Cuz I’m going to have an IELTS exam next week so plz help me more.
      Thank you in advance.

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      August 18, 2017 at 7:09 am

      [07:09:34, 18/8/2017] Cám ơn các bạn!

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      August 18, 2017 at 7:10 am

      [07:10:46, 18/8/2017] Cám ơn các bạn!

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