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TOPIC: Some people believe that government should spend on money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that traffic jam have been becoming a serious problem in many citites and countries from parts of the world. While some people think that providing and expanding the road systems is the best solution. In my opinion, I would argue that investing heavily in the infrastructure of train and underground networks is much more advisable.
On the one hand, there are two primary reasons why building new and wider roads will mitigate gridlock. One reason is that, the roads currently are inadequate a surgering number of vehicles in city centres, especially in rush hours. Thus, the improvement of road systems would offer assistance to citizens in terms of commuting to work easily. Another reason is that, if government interests in interstate roads, many drivers perhaps would reach their destination without facing the traffic congestion on the main routes.
On the other hand, it seems to me that authorities should invest in constructing train and subway lines to tackle traffic congestion problem. Firstly, it is important to have a variety of means of transports to choose when travelling anywhere because expenses for them perhaps are cheaper than than using private vehicles. This leads to the amount of traffic could be alliviated considerably. Secondly, thanks to these public transport networks, individuals probably would travel more quickly and conveniently. This will relieve pressure on the existing roads.
In conclusion, whether to build train and underground systems or constructing new and wider roads. However, as far as I am concerned local councils prioritise spending on roads is much more effective.
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