[Tieu Kim]

University education should be restricted to the very best academic students, rather than being available to a large proportion of young people.
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To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that studying at a university should be limited to students who gained the most academically instead of participating of a large percentage of the young. However, I give my strong opposition to this statement with the following reasons.
The main reason is that a country needs to develop with more citizens who are educated well in a university, so the authority intends to enrich knowledge and open studying opportunities for all citizens. This helps the prosperity and wealthy of the country with having talented generations. For example, the government can look for the young who are good at the information technology field studying from the university more easily to improve the nation’s information security because this field was taught to a majority of students. Therefore, educating in universities should be widened for an enormous proportion of young people.
Another significant reason is that university education is an important sector of the community that is supported and subsidized by the government, so it is fair for all young inhabitants to take part in a university. Most public funds are collected from all citizens’ taxes to promote different sectors in a country including education. However, if university education is only restricted to a small proportion of students, this makes some problems in society such as creating discrimination as well as generating unsatisfied citizens. This can lead to negative effects on the management and politics of a nation. For this reason, all young people should have opportunities to involve a university to implement the justice in the public so that society is better developed.
In conclusion, according to developing a nation and importance of education sector in the community, I believe that university education should open for all young people.

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[Hien Nguyen Thi Thu]

Thank you for your effort!

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[Hien Nguyen Thi Thu]

Thank you for your effort!

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[Tieu Kim]

Dear Mr./Ms. Hien,

I saw in your note “confusing” at “participating of a large percentage of the young” in my essay, please advice me how to adjust this.

Thank you so much,
Best regards,