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Modern technology has had great influence on people’s entertainment choices, making them less creative. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

An act of exploiting entertainment features on modern devices is accused of deteriorating people’s creativity. While I accept that the development of modern technology somehow draws too much individuals’ dependence, I argue that certainly by this way of usage, people can broaden their horizons and be more creative.
Undeniably, modern technology has influenced people’s recreation activities so profoundly that they have gradually became overdependent on, even addict to it. If reading books or gathering around used to be people’s first consideration when it comes to unwinding after stressful work, the emergence of portable devices such as smartphones or tablets makes playing games or being active on social networking websites like facebook or twitter be a trendy stress reliver. This is an inevitable outcome when electronic gadgets can meet the busy bees’ demand of convinience and diversification.
However, focusing on entertainment availables on mobile devices only does not synonymously mean a poor creativity and imagination. By contrast, I believe this evolution of advanced technology has encourage creating activities. From the scope of technical engineers, the fact that they have to constantly come up with new ideas and non-stop try to apply such concepts into reality to attract users evidently proves their powerful creativity. As a result, hundreds of interesting and beneficial applications have been widely introduced, helping people not only in the field of entertainment but also in various areas such as industry and education. Moreover, thanks to the development of social networking, electronic users are provided with free channels to easily get access to raw ideas, materials and create their masterpieces. By that I want to emphasize the power of sharing that inspires more people than ever to be creative their own way.
In brief, despite skeptical opinion on the development of technology, I strongly believe in it feature of developing people’s mind and imagination.

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