• Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

    • Tran

      Participant
      December 16, 2015 at 2:19 pm

      Pls help to correct it

      Sorry, I cannot attach the word file

      The pie charts compare high-income group with low-income group in terms of the percentage of monthly income used in seven different categories in a specific European nation.
      Overall, this country saw a difference of spending between the rich and the poor. It is evident that while people with low income spend much their money on basic human needs, the wealthy allocated their earnings to different purposes in more balance ways.
      First of all, it is true that poor people spent 53 % of their income on daily demands, including 29 % for nutrition-related products and 24 % for energy cost. In contrast, the rich had the significantly smaller expenditure on the same needs, only 15% for food & drink and 7% for fuel bill. Instead, the high income group tended to use a large proportion of earning on entertainment & spiritual activities and miscellaneous, accounting for 21 % and 23 % respectively, compared to 11 % and 18 % of the low income individuals
      Likewise, while the rich spent 12 % of income on restaurants & hotels and 16 % on transport, the figures for the poor spending on the same purposes were 4 % and 9 %. Finally, the other striking remark was that both groups had the relatively similar figures for the clothing products, representing for 6 % in high-income group and 5% in low-income one.

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    • Nguyễn Anh

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      December 18, 2015 at 9:54 pm

      Fixed!
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    • Trần Diệu Oanh

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      December 18, 2015 at 9:59 pm

      Mình xin lỗi vì đã reply vào topic của các bạn nhưng hiện tại mình không thể post bài với nội dung ghi “”YOU CANNOT CREATE NEW TOPICS”.” Các bạn có thể giải thích hộ mình lý do đc ko,vì giờ ko post được thì mất số bài tuần này (mai t7 và CN ko đc post)
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