Chữa bài IELTS Task 1
The bar chart compares three different exports of Southland in three perious from 2000 to 2017 and 2025.
Overall, it is various trends of international tourism, dairy products, and meat products. While meat products are the lowest of exporting products, international tourism is the highest income.
It is clear that international tourism has a grow trend from 2000 to 2025. It was about nearly 8 billion euros then growing up to about 9 and predicted to approximately 10 in 2000, 2017 and 2025 respectily. In contract, meat products have been decreased 0.5 billion euros from 6 billion euros since 2000, and after next 8 years, it is going to be exactly 5 billion euros.
Besides, dairy products have a fluctuated trend, when it was 7 billion euros in 2000. After that, it peaks at 10 billion euros in the certain year, but the products are going down at nearly 9.5 billion euros in 2025.Attachments:
You must be logged in to view attached files.here is the correction for your essay. hope it helps you.
Attachments:
You must be logged in to view attached files.
The forum ‘Chữa bài IELTS Task 1’ is closed to new discussions and replies.