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Hi bạn Bài này của bạn viết khá ổn, tuy vẫn còn idea lệch vs đoạn. Các cụm từ liên kết hơi informal, ngữ pháp vẫn còn rất ít các câu phức. Bạn xem video này và cả channel này để tham khảo thêm nha: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zx-JcXsbUqQ&t=140s Chúc bạn học tốt!

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01 Dollar IELTS Writing Correction Service – Submit your Writing here
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01 Dollar IELTS Writing Correction Service – Submit your Writing here

Dinh Cong Anh
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February 24, 2020 at 6:45 pm
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March 6, 2020 at 1:02 pm
Hi bạn
Bài này của bạn viết khá ổn, tuy vẫn còn idea lệch vs đoạn. Các cụm từ liên kết hơi informal, ngữ pháp vẫn còn rất ít các câu phức.
Bạn xem video này và cả channel này để tham khảo thêm nha:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zx-JcXsbUqQ&t=140s
Chúc bạn học tốt!
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