• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • trangdang17995

      Participant
      September 22, 2017 at 4:40 pm

      Many people say the gap between rich and poor people is wider, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer.
      What problems could this situation cause and what measures can be done to address those problem?

      The economic inequality has been a common tendency in almost all countries around the world. There are various problems behind this trend and several solutions should be proposed to solve these problems.
      There are two primary problems caused by the wide gap between the rich and the poor. Firstly, inequality may increase social status differentiation creating wider social distances. As a result, the poor feel disrespected and looked down on so they have to fight for equality which leads to social insecurity. For example, the poor in the US organize wealth inequality protests in several states to ask for justice. Secondly, the rising tide of inequality stimulates social crime rate because the poor have to manage to survive. In fact, burglarizing or robbing from wealthy people is the simplest way to earn a living.
      Some simple measures should be implemented to deal with the problems caused by the widening gap between the poor and the rich. Governments should assist low-income youth and adults access training opportunities that enable them to fully developed. As a result, they have equal chances to get the best job prospects. In addition, increasing average salary policy needs to be established to ensure employees could meet their basic human needs. For instance, the average hourly wage in Ontario, Canada in 2017 increases nearly 5.8 percentage from the previous year due to the rising living standard.
      In conclusion, the problem of the rivalry between the poor and the rich can be tackled by effective measures on a governmental level.

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    • diemlinh

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      September 25, 2017 at 2:43 pm

      Very well-done.

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      September 26, 2017 at 3:21 pm

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