Chữa bài IELTS Task 1
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The given pie charts illustrate what Australian highschoolers decided to do after graduating from secondary school in 1980, 1990 and 2000.
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The given pie charts illustrate what Australian highschoolers decided to do after graduating from secondary school in 1980, 1990 and 2000.
Overall, throughout the years, the figures of the group of Australian students who were employed was growing, while there was a decline in the portion of those pursuing higher levels of education.
In 1980, a half of Australian school leavers wanted to advance their scholastic achievements. This rate plummetted to just 38 percent after a decade and remained relatively stable at 37 per cent 10 years later. In contrast, the percentage of pupils pursued a job right after leaving secondary school increased steadily over the shown period, from 40 percent in the initial stage to over a half after two decades.
The figure for those who have no job after graduating from secondary school, however, witnessed a minor fluctuation when this rate rose by 2 percent to 12 percent from 1980 to 1990, followed by a decrease to 8 percent in 2000.
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