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The graph gives detail of car possession in Great Britain over 37 years period, between 1971 and 2007 by percentage.
At first glance it is clearly that the proportion of households without use car over this period were tend to decrease.
On one hand, in 1971, around 50 percent of households had not regular use of car. However, after 1971, the proportion of possessive car number went up continually. For example, two cars ownership climbed significantly from 6 percent to 26 percent. Additionally, the percentage of three or more cars increased approximately 5 percent which was uncommon in Great Britain.
On other hand, one car had been common in Britain from 1971 to 2007. Although the percentage of family own one car fluctuated the proportion was always around 44 percent in this period. As a result, the percentage of households did not use car decline dramatically.

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