• Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

    • Participant
      February 21, 2017 at 2:15 am

      The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.

      Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

      The three bar charts illustrate the proportion of people who purchase some kinds of music with different ages and genders in Britain.

      It can be clearly seen that male spends much money than female to buy all kinds of album music. Furthermore, people who are more 45 years old only like a classical music instead of listening to pop or rock music. By contrast, most adult people pay more attention to buy Pop and Rock music, especially young people.

      In 24 – 34 years old group, which is over 30%, are more love pop music than 16 – 24 years old group, accounting for about 28%. In 35 – 44 years old group, which constitutes nearly 25%, is about five times as big as oldest group. According to the rock music bar chart, which is likely similar with pop music, male buy more album than female, 28% and 19% respectively. Additionally, the percentage of men who buy classical music is bigger than female, about 8% and 6% respectively. Moreover, the majority of a classical music is 45+ group, which had approximately 20% and the second biggest is 25 – 34 group.

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