01 Dollar IELTS Writing Correction Service – Submit your Writing here
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A glance at the line chart provided how much time it need to take for three companies to produce a car during the period from 2000 to 2012
Overall , Ford and Toyota which were two companies , had time to produce stably . By contrast time of Honda’s brand needed to manuafacture a new car was considerable fluctuation.
From 2000 to 2004 , time for Ford and Toyota to produce a new car that slightly increased. While this figure plummered for Honda from approximately 30 days to 11 days . However , from 2004 to 2008 it happened a sudden increase fro this company from 11 days to approximately 35 days . Throughout the remainder of the period 2008 to 2018 time to make a new car continued to increase . While time for Toyota tended gradual decline during the period from 2004 to 2012. In term of Ford it tended constantly raise .
At the first glance , Honda was the slowest company in manuafacturing a new car . Nevertheless the slowest company belonged to Ford and Toyota was the fastest company in producing a new car .[17:37:24, 12/3/2020] Cám ơn các bạn!
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