[Bella]

The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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[Nguyen Nhung]

There you go!

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[Bella]

Hi Nhung,

Thank you for your correction.
I will try to rewrite and send it back to you

Also, I intend to take general Ielts instead of Academic
Do you have any advice for the preparation? Should I still keep practicing academic Ielts task 2 for general task 2?

Thanks

Kind regards,
Bella Nguyen