Chữa bài IELTS Task 1
The table show datas on the underground railway systerms of six cities which incluses London, Paris, Tokyo, Washing ton DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles.
Overall, London has the earliest opening year with the longest route while Los Angeles lastly opened in the early 21 century. It is clear that the next 4 cities opened shorter routes for the underground railway in the 20 century.
In the 19 century, London opened 394 kilometres of route, which picks 775 million passengers pear year, in 1863. Then after 2 centuries, Los Angeles city built only 28 kilometres of route with passengers per year, in 2001. Before, Kyoto had the lowest number of passengers, only 45 million people using 11 kilometres route of underground railway in 1981.
In the 20 century, there were three cities opened underground railway Paris, Tokyo and Washington DC in 1900, 1927 and 1976, respectily. In Tokyo, it was the highest number of passengers about 1927 million people per year with 155 kilometres. The second highest amount of passengers was 1191 million people although Paris had the second longest route, 199 kilometres. Washington DC had 126 kilometre of underground railway routes and had 144 million passengers per year.Attachments:
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