• Chữa bài IELTS Task 1

    • Phuc

      Participant
      February 23, 2016 at 3:42 pm

      The graphs show how an island transforms into a tourist attraction after building some facilities for tourist demands.
      Overall, the island becomes more crowded after the construction with many buildings and a simple transport system which connects the whole west and central parts of the island together while still remain its natural beauty.
      At first glance, the first graph shows a widely desolate island which has a long narrow shape as a skateboard with a smaller end in the west. It’s about 200 metres long with trees and a beach on the west.
      After being constructed, the island turns into a new look. There is a T-shaped pier connects the sailing-boat landing to the reception, which is located in the heart of the construction site, through the vehicle track that ends up at a restaurant behind the reception. The reception separates two accommodation areas which has 6 and 9 houses respectively, they both have a circle footpath which connect the houses together. In addition, the bigger one makes a complete circle while the smaller has a short mixed part with the vehicle track on the left and link to the beach on the right.

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    • Công Thành Nguyễn

      Participant
      February 26, 2016 at 4:51 pm

      Dear, your revised essay is ready!
      Hopefully you see it useful, feel free to comment. Thanks!

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