[Nguyễn Trần Mai Anh]

Topic: In many countries now, young single people no longer stay with their parents until they are married, but leave to study or work somewhere else.
Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?

In recent years, the number of unmarried youth living far from the house to work or study has been increased. Although some people think that this situation is rather negative, I believe that its benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
There are three main reasons why still staying at home until marriage brings more advantages. Firstly, everybody, especially for men, is capable of saving a lot of time because there is a Mom who cooks meals or does housework for them. Therefore, they just need to concentrate well on their work or study. Moreover, choosing to live near parents reduces the costs of living such as money for renting a house, buying food or paying bills. Thus, individuals who are working can save some money for guaranteeing their future. Finally, parents are moral and financial supports by your side. Mom and Dad not only give you the feeling of protecting but also help you solve all problems at any time you need.
On the one hand, living independently is much a better choice for the youth. There is no doubt that one day, everyone will face their own challenges and have their own family to take care. Therefore, leaving their parents’ home as soon as possible offers single people an opportunity to be more mature and self-reliant to deal with all of their problems by themselves. If they always have parents to take the responsibility instead of them, it is obviously impossible to learn any experiences to prepare to enter the real life. As a result, someone who depends too much on their family is unable to survive under pressures of modern life.
In conclusion, in my opinion, not living behind parents’ backs when people grow up is the most suitable approach to ensure a bright future for young people.
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