[Nguyễn Trần Mai Anh]

TOPIC: Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not localpeople. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
Reasons: Well know about that place while curiosity.

Solutions: Invest in such places to upgrade facilities and adapt technology
Vesting such place as an extra activates
It is undeniable that such places as museums and historical sites are ideal traveling spots for anyone who want to open their minds. However, the problem is that most visitors to such places are tourists instead of local citizens. This is perhaps caused by some reasons which can be —- to raise attraction of historical places to all groups of people.
To begin with, there are two main explanations as to why museums and historical places are more popularamong travelers than the local. The first reason is that local citizens get used to with such places and know well about that places while tourists may have only chance to expand their knowledge about history of places they visit. Therefore, the local show a laid-off attitude towards exploring their localities which isconstract to excitement and curiosity of tourists. Accordingly, ticket prices is also a barrier for local citizens to visit museums and historical places,because local citizens suppose that it is such a way of wasting money to pay for entrance tickets of spots in their localities .
However, this trend can be mitigated thanks to practical efforts from governments and individuals. The first solution for this case is to increase budgets to invest in museums and historical places. As a result, the infrastructure and technology can be upgraded to meet high demands of tourists as well as local citizens. Additionally, trips to museums and historical places should be consider as an extracurricular activities to increase curiosity among students. Once this is put into practice, the number of local travelers will rise considerably.
In conclusion, although museums and historical places are not attractive to the local as to tourists, this inequality can be narrowed owing to potential methods.
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