Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
Some scientists think it is very soon that computers will be more intelligent than the human. Some people think it is a positive development, while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, there has been a growing trend towards computer to be more intelligent than the human brain. Although some people view that human lives have better improvements much more than before, others seem to disagree that the innovative computer will lead to many negative effects to all mankind.
On the one hands, there are various beneficial developments of computers. First, since analyzing advanced data and organizing complicate information in computer allow people to speed up the pace of laborious tasks. Therefore, innovative computers can become a convenience productivity and they are better than workplace fulfillment in the past. Second, computer technology can connect workers in different countries. This benefits not only workers can join in telecommunicating and teleconferencing through a computer but also treatment and crime detection were possible lead to the powerful computer technology.
On the other hands, this development has its disadvantages. It can be due to disappear many offices in the future. People are susceptible to be lazy employees and do not interact with each other that they are not an eager beaver in their work. In addition, because people spend much time in front of a screen that has an adverse effect on their health. As a result, this may due to long-term changes in going to bed and getting up every day that resemble the effects of their own internal clocks.
In conclusion, although a computer is important to some, it impacts badly as well. Depending on the purpose of using a computer, people should be able to find their best way. (260 words)
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