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Hi bạn Bài của bạn khá ổn. Tuy nhiên đề bài yêu cầu đưa ra ý kiến "to what extent do you agree or disagree" nên bạn cần thể hiện rõ hơn quan điểm của bạn trong đề bài, bạn đồng ý hay không đồng ý với câu hỏi được ra với mức độ nào. Bạn xem bài mẫu và phần nhận xét của mình có gì thắc mắc thì hỏi nhé!

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01 Dollar IELTS Writing Correction Service – Submit your Writing here
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01 Dollar IELTS Writing Correction Service – Submit your Writing here

lehau.uet
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March 8, 2020 at 3:49 pm
Mình gửi bài viết. Cám ơn các bạn
Đề bài: When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
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khanhlinhphan357
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March 15, 2020 at 10:33 pm
Hi bạn
Bài của bạn khá ổn. Tuy nhiên đề bài yêu cầu đưa ra ý kiến “to what extent do you agree or disagree” nên bạn cần thể hiện rõ hơn quan điểm của bạn trong đề bài, bạn đồng ý hay không đồng ý với câu hỏi được ra với mức độ nào. Bạn xem bài mẫu và phần nhận xét của mình có gì thắc mắc thì hỏi nhé!
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lehau.uet
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March 24, 2020 at 3:13 pm
Cám ơn bạn nhiều nhá. :D

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