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The given tables provide information about temperatures and daylight hours over the same weekend in Mumbai and Moscow in May 2007.
Overall, it is noticeable that temperatures in Mumbai, India were higher than those in Moscow, Russia. Besides, in terms of daylight hours, sunset time in Mumbai was earlier than that in Moscow whereas there was an opposite trend about sunrise hours in both cities.
Looking more closely at the tables, we can see that the maximum temperatures in Mumbai at weekend were nearly the same at 33.3*. By contrast, the maximum temperatures in Moscow almost halved compared to those in Mumbai at 15* in three final days of a week.
In terms of the maximum temperatures, in Moscow, they increased remarkably by 3* from Friday to Sunday while in Mumbai, there was an insignificant difference about them at 15*.
As can be seen from the tables, it is apparent that at weekend the sunrise time in Mumbai was later than that in Moscow. To be specific, the sun rose in Mumbai at nearly 6.01 am while that in Moscow at approximately 5.22 am. Conversely, the sunset time in Mumbai was earlier than that in Moscow. To be precise, the sun set in Mumbai and Moscow at nearly 19.03 pm and 22.01 pm respectively.

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Overall, your essay is good with no spelling errors and only some grammar errors. But you need to use more range of structures and vocabulary to improve your scores in this task. You also should try to use different ways to describe a table, which could be learned by reading more model answers to see how other people do it. That might help your essay become less repetitive.

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