Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
There are some thoughts that all teenagers are forced to be volunteers in their spare time to benefit the whole community. In my opinion, i do not agree with this idea since unpaid work does not good for the younger at all.
There is a variety of reasons why children should not take time to do volunteer work. Most young people are now under a lot of pressure with their studies that they do not have any free time left. School is just as demanding as a full-time job and children have to live up their family’expectations that they must do all daily homework, which will help them pass exam revision. Then if children did have leisure time, it would better for them to relax and enjoy themselves or do some outside activities such as games and sports rather than working any job.
On the other hand, i do not believe that society has anything to gain from obiliging young people to do unpaid work. In fact, i would argue that it goes against the values of free and fair of human rights to force a group of people to do something against their will. Therefore, it just leads to the resentment among teenagers who would feel that they were being used, and parents who would not want to be told how to raise their children. Currently, nobody is forced to do work on volunteer basis, and it surely is the best systems.
In conclusion, there should be no law that obliges the younger to take part in volunteer part-time job.
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