[Nguyet]

We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used for in future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?

Computers are the part of our nowadays world. More and more we become dependent on computers. They are used for many purposes and in various fields such as education, business, medical facilities, government offices, airlines, environment, crime detection, and so on. There is no doubt that thanks to computers, everyday life is easier for us because of their huge advantages. This essay will discuss the applications of computers in the future and their advantages and disadvantage as well.
People who are using the computer perform different tasks more quickly and easily. The use of the computer saves time, efforts and reduces the overall cost to complete a particular task. For example, once you have a basic understanding of using a word processor, you can create, edit, store, share and print documents. This job was impossible or much slower with all pre-existing technologies. The ability to store large amounts of data on a computer is convenient and inexpensive, and saves space. Additionally, connecting a computer to the internet brings other powerful benefits. By using the computer, you can have access and get all information, valuable resources about anything. For instance, you even can enroll online courses from the famous universities around the world or you can do online shopping by sitting at your home.
In the near future, computers are more intelligent than what we could dream about them. Computers may know how to track the user’s behaviors and habits to serve better their individual needs. For instance, a computer could pause the show you are watching automatically without the need for your physical impact, just by seeing you are leaving the room and no longer paying attention and then it connects to other devices in the home to turn lights on or open doors, and so on.
In conclusion, we are living in a technological era and computers become the essential need for people. To my knowledge, without the computer, people are hard to accomplish their targets. However, using the computer for a long time can lead injuries of the hands, elbows, neck, eyes and back. Besides, different tasks are performed automatically by using computers resulting in an increase of unemployment in society.

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