• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • Khổng Vân Anh

      Participant
      April 7, 2017 at 9:27 pm

      CAUSES AND SOLUTIONS
      Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a
      large number of children play computer games. What are the negative
      impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the
      bad effects?
      It is true that there are more and more modern electronic devices in our life, it contain many new games what makes children addicted. There are a number of adverse effects and several solutions to tackle these problems.
      There are two primary reasons why there are adverse impacts of using a computer. One reason is that using the computer in a long time is harmful to health of users such as eyes, physical and spirit strength, because playing computer games makes people spend less time for outside actives. They sit in front of computer all day without move at all. Another reason is that the Internet negatively influences child’s cognitive development because there are more and more harmful information on the Internet without careful censor. When using modern electric devices, the children might have unexpected influences from bad documents like erotic pictures, violence games. For example, almost children become more grumpy and insensitive after playing violence games even some in those may be easy to become crimes.
      However, measures must be taken by parents and schools to minimize these adverse effects. Firstly, Educating harmful effects of using modern electric devices to people which ought to be more widely promoted through parents, schools and public medias. And strict in giving children the right to use the computer within reasonable time and beneficial document sources. Secondly, the governments should take heavy penalties for websites that aims to reap of money without thinking about future of the younger generation.
      In conclusion, it is clear that there are various negative impacts of spending so much time to use the computer and solutions need to be taken soon to tackle this problems.

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    • trucquynhnm

      Member
      April 9, 2017 at 5:45 pm

      Feedback của bạn. Keep up the hard work!

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