• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • Khổng Vân Anh

      Participant
      May 15, 2017 at 9:19 am

      Many people thing it is very important to protect environment but they make no effort to do it themselves. Why does it happen? What actions should individuals take to protect the environment?
      Most of people can understand that environment is needed to safeguard, but few of people can do this. In this essay I will present a number of key reasons why some residents have destroyed environment and some solutions to solve this issue.
      There are two main reasons why some people have bad actives to surround environment. One reason is that some individuals have irresponsibility to preserve fresh air in our community, this originates from laziness. For example, many tourists visited Sam Son beach who throwing litter in wrong places, as a result the beach be contaminated with water that causes health problems such as cancer or heart disease. Another reason is that many people are lack of knowledge to understand about serious consequences of environmental ruination. For instance, some ethnic minorities who just look at immediate personal benefits have deforest to sell timber to earn money that is causes more erratic climatic events, floods, landslide phenomenon each year.
      The government should issue provisions to punish severely with those who litter indiscriminately, in contravention of regulation. Moreover, the authority should propagandize environment protection measures for residents who can understand clearly about serious consequences from destruction of forest via public media such as radio, television, and websites.
      In conclusion, the leadership should provide timely solutions to tackle this problem soon. Besides, each individual also need to be conscious of building a better and better environment.

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    • diemlinh

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      May 15, 2017 at 5:07 pm

      [5/15/2017, 5:07:16 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    • diemlinh

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      May 15, 2017 at 5:07 pm

      Kindly check. Feel free to leave your questions here. Thanks!

    • Khổng Vân Anh

      Participant
      May 15, 2017 at 10:11 pm

      Chào bạn!
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      Mình đã xem và sửa lại. làm phiền bạn xem lại giúp mình một lần nữa nhé !

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