Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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[22:28:51, 11/7/2018] Cám ơn các bạn!
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Nowadays, parents tend to let their kids grow up in some modern city, as they think it is such a great chance for their kids. However, others believe countryside is better. Therefore, this essay is written to present the pros and cons of both places.
On the one hand there are various reasons why parents appreciate urban areas. Initially, cities give children many first-class facilities for living and studying. In the other words, almost everything which is good for kids such as schools, hospitals or safe leisure centers is available in towns. Moreover, parents who live and work at the city usually have high income, which is a considerable advantage for kids’ development. However, despite a number of benefits, urban areas also have some significant drawbacks. Indeed, in some modern families, parents tend to spend much time on work without taking care of their children, which has the direct influence to kids’ personality. Furthermore, the emotionless living way of urban residents also impacts children negatively.
On the other hand, some people believe that countryside is a great place for some reasons. Firstly, rural areas are fresh and peaceful, which is the good factor effecting kids’ maturity. In addition, in the countryside, life is not as busy as in the city, so parents and even neighbors have more time to spend on kids. Thus, kids can live and be mature in the arm of love, which makes them grow up well with the charity. Nevertheless, in rural areas; education, medicine and living standard are backward, so it definitely causes several problems. For example, kids having terminally ills are hard to be treated and healed in the countryside.
In conclusion, countryside or modern city has both pros and cons. Therefore, parents should take care of kids more to help them ignore the drawback of the place they live.Please kindly check!
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