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In recent years, increasingly people choose to live in a vertical city. Many people believed that it is the best way, whereas others believed that living in a horizontal city is more comfortable. In my opinion, I think the first view point prefer to the model life now.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that ground-based area has many benefit. Firstly, people have to pay less for building services. It seems evident that, living in a detached accommodation will save many spending on elevator, sanitation or parking fee. These such feat hold a part of monthly expenditure, instead of this people will have money for make the most out of annual vacation. Secondly, living lower to the ground is safer for inhabitant what emergencies occur. In fact, there are many accidents such as fire, short-circuil happened in apartment and many victims can not go out because they dwell in high floor.
However, living in a vertical area, in my opinion, have more facilities than the area mentioned above. Firstly, residents can enjoy many attached services like gym fitness, swimming pool and shopping mall right in their own apartment block. This anables people have an integral life easily. Secondly, with vertical city, the public infrastructure will be model and suitable. The government will have more space to build some public usage such as hospital, school or green park. Besides, in urban area, the over population is more concerned, thus living in a department is one of the solution to less pressure for housing facilities.
In conclusion, it is debatable whether living in vertical or horizontal area, however I believe that apartment building is more suitable modernization process now.

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[Oanh Nguyen]

You have been making remarkable efforts! Nevertheless, it is advisable that you try to improve your word forms.
You did a good job in presenting your key points and stay cohesive. The way you extended your ideas are clear and perfect. Choosing to give 2 reasons is a great choice. Personally, I suggest you go further, be more detailed in paragraph 3 since it’s your main part
Personally, I suggest a specific horizontal/vertical city name as an example. But if it’s too hard to think of in limited times, your examples are good enough

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