• Chữa Writing 911

    Ace updated 7 years, 5 months ago 1 Member · 2 Posts
    • Ace

      Participant
      February 24, 2018 at 2:53 pm

      Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
      In what way has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
      Is this positive or negative development?

      It is true that technology has changed the method of communication and influenced relationships. In my opinion, there are both positive and negative effects of types of relationships people make.
      technology has a variety of negative effects in relationships. Firstly, nowadays, instead of face-to-face communication with each other, people using technology as a tool to communicate. Laptop and mobile phone are optimized to communicate conveniently with other people. For example, in the meeting of close friends, they do not speak any words without facing on the screens. Secondly, in the long periods, it will effect to the metal of human. The ratio of depression increase more and more, because modern people less communicate with each other.
      However, there are a lot of positive effects of technology on types of relationships. Firstly, technology has become a useful tool in communication for every employees in company. It helps company that can hold the meeting between staff in anywhere. Secondly, the communication method between students and teachers in education have become various. Instead of going to the school, students can learn the lectures of teachers anywhere, anytime by e-learning.
      In conclusion, technology has brought a various negative development in the way people interact each other. However, there are also many positive impacts of technology on types of relationship people make.

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    • Ace

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      February 26, 2018 at 8:27 am

      Bạn sửa nhầm bài rồi bạn ơi

      • anna229112

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        February 26, 2018 at 2:22 pm

        Hi bạn

        Rất xin lỗi bạn vì sự sai sót này. Do batch hôm qua của mình có 2 bài cùng đề nên mình đã không để ý kĩ càng.

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