• Chữa Writing 911

    ivynguyen updated 7 years, 11 months ago 3 Members · 3 Posts
    • Mai

      Participant
      August 8, 2017 at 10:19 pm

      Some people think watching television is bad for children in all ways.
      Others say it is good for children to get knowledge. Discuss both view and
      give your opinion.

      As a result of technology development, television is more and more popular
      with children. Many people think that watching television impact badly to
      children, whereas others believe that it help children to get knowledge.

      Paying attention to television is beneficial in some ways. Firstly, by
      reality programs, children will be approach the social knowledge which is
      not available in school education. Therefore, children may avoid some
      social vices. Secondly, the imagination will be improved because of the
      scenes and the sound in television. This can inspire children to study
      hard.

      On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why children must be
      watched television so much. First, if children spend more time following up
      television, they will ignore something around. Sometime, they will not
      focus on their studying. In addition, sitting for hours in font of the
      television screen effect on children heath. Children may be short sighted
      because of looking at the screen.

      In conclusion, it seems evident that both allowing children to watch
      television and against prevent them have their own advantages.

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    • mainganha310

      Member
      August 12, 2017 at 2:04 am

      [8/12/2017, 2:04:43 AM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    • ivynguyen

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      August 12, 2017 at 10:01 am

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