Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
The most significant reason for determine to select an occupation is the level of money you earn. In my point of view, I agree that the wage is important because it increases the standard of life, and you could follow your hobbies after working hours. However, I believe that the others have more important consideration.
After graduating university, all of us always want to choose a high-paying job. The life after university have many challenges and the high income play an integral part to deal with the problems. You won’t worried when you desire to buy something for you. For instance, when you get married and you need a private life, you can choose a good department without consideration. Furthermore, you need relax when you come back home, someone follow their hobbies. If you don’t have a stable income, you couldn’t afford for some particular hobbies such as photography, diving, cycling.
In the other hand, salary is not always an important factor, someone have different reason to choose a job. Even if you are paid more money, but you don’t satisfy you job, it may be a disaster. For example, a person adores business, he couldn’t become a good medical staff. The others have truly desire to devote for the social, so that they dedicate for philanthrophic organization or raise fund for charity.
In conclusion, almost people will consider the salary they are paid. But this is not the best choice for everyone who want to satisfy their desire and contribute to the community
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