Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?
People always argued that what is the most important to become successful people in life. In my opinion, I believe that fortunate people easily become success story. However, I also think that intelligent person usually attain their goals.
In Eastern culture, people strongly believe that the success base on your lucky. Three Kingdom is the best selling chinese historical book. Gia Cat Luong who were talented and smart, he worked hard to protect Han dynasty. Even He won a lot of battles, his dynasty fell in 272 BC. Especially, Eastern Culture have an extremely impact on people thinking. People just believe their destiny, which means if you born in lucky time you will be successful people, and vice versa.
Although fortunate people have more advantages than normal people, we still have a lot of story about successful people by hardworking. Modern people also think that people could achieved great successes in industrious actions. Steve Jobs who changes the world by making state of the art devices such as Iphone, Ipad and Macbook. Even He was unfortunate people and experienced many failures in his life. Hardworking and perspicacity are key factors influencing successful people.
In conclusion, I strongly think that ability and luck is the main key for people who want to achieve their goals. You could not reach your targets if you do not have both ability and fortunate destiny.
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