• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • Nguyễn Quang

      Participant
      March 30, 2018 at 10:37 pm

      Some people think a job not only provides income but also social life. Others think it is better to develop social life with people you do not work with. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
      Many people argue that an employment helps to earn a living and provide them with the chance to establish relationships with co-workers while others are in favour of expanding social life beyond working boundaries. This essay will discuss both points of view and present my own opinion.
      It is true that jobs support workers with both income and their social life. In terms of finance, people could earn a salary to make ends meet. This amount of money also allows them to guarantee the better living standards for their own family, and thereby building a concrete foundation for society development as a whole. When it comes to social life, working relationships with colleagues, bosses and partners are an indispensable part in workplace as people spend a vast amount of time in their life working. These contacts play an important role in work, for instance, generating a supportive working environment as a result of strong bonds between employees.
      However, I believe that it is more beneficial to develop a broad social network outside workplace. In fact, relationships straying away from frontier of workplace enable people to connect with others from different backgrounds in various fields. They would, therefore, not only enlarge their knowledge but also have open-minded thinking and comprehensive insights to every problem resulting in better deal with difficult matters in work and life as well. Furthermore, an extensive social network gives people countless opportunities to obtain a successful career. For example, people could get a decent job through acquaintances’ helps, or in particular, if anyone plans to start their own company, those diverse relationships might bring a significant number of consumers initially.
      In conclusion, although a job carries out money and working contacts, I concede that it is advisable to widen relationships out of work context.

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    • haduyduywru

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      March 31, 2018 at 10:44 am

      Kindly check!

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