Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
Topic: Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that luck is the key factor in leading to the success. I completely disagree with this statement.
The first reason is that for me, only people who work hard deserve to achieve success. The way leading to success is always full of difficulties challenges. If a person can have an easy time enjoying success, everyone can deserve good things which success brings to. Therefore, the harder people try, the more worthy their success is. As only when you endeavor a lot to get something, you can know how valuable your success is. For example, Steve Job is a typical example of the great man who notched up success by his talent and effort. Starting out his career from nothing, he made Apple become the leading brand around the world.
Secondly, success can’t totally depend on the luck. It’s the common knowledge to reach the goal; you have experienced and learnt a lot of things. It’s impossible for anyone to achieve success without learning. Therefore, these lessons will lead to more maturity and experience, which make your success more sustainable. It’s obvious that luck is one of essential factors to make success but it doesn’t help your success last longer without attempt.
Overall, luck is necessary things to complete their objectives but it cannot weigh other factors.Attachments:
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