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Nowadays, full- time university students tend to focus on their studying. Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, paying undevided attention to the studying in the colleges seems to be the top-priority of the university students who continue their higher education. Some people believe that it is vital for them to take part in some extra-activities. This essay completely agree with this statement for the following reasons.
First of all, contacting to the outdoor activities creates an extremely valuable opportunity for the students to apply their teachers’ concepts to reality. The knowledge they get provide them various important skills that have to be used almost all the time in life. Forthermore, the students are likely to obtain a lot of real experiences as well as a deeper understanding about their subjects. For instance, a future teacher needs to participate in some organisations that aim to make funds for the poor children or teach them some basic lessons as a volunteer. Consequently, they have a chance to put all their knowledge into practise and might complete their semester successfully.
Secondly, people who have more real experiences in their field may have a chance to chase the top-jobs in their future. The practices they obtain during the shooling years enables them to make a better impression on the company and achieve their goals much more easier then those who spend all the time to focus on studying alone. When having the appropriate status in either career or social life, they can enjoy a high standard of living and a better life quality. For instance, almost all the companies are seeking for the ones who have a broaden horizons about all aspects of one subject to deal with the challenge. And they probably decide to choose the candidates with an open-minded character, adapting simply to new conditions and even offer them a pay rise regularly for their performences.
In conclusion, I believe that students pursuing further education should join in some other activities outside school besides spending the whole period learning new theories that they hardly spend in their future lives.

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