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Question:
Some people think that people who are over 60 years of age should not work and retire earlier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?——————————————————————————
Planning:
1. agree to some extent
2. on the one hand: retire soon -> more time to spend on hobbies, grand children, travel etc. Tutoring other people -> passing down the experience. example: grandfather retire at 55 to travel.
3. on the other hand: some people prefer working -> make their brain work -> keep their memory -> stay sharp, keep cognition intact. Example: grandfather is a workaholic, still working at 70.
4. conclusion——————————————————————————-
People who are over 60 year old are often considered to be within a suitable age range to take retirement. Although I do agree to some extent, I think there are still some legitimate reasons for those people to continue working.
On the one hand, early retirement is suitable for most working people especially the labour workers as their bodies probably aren’t able to keep up with the physical demand from their jobs. As a result, early retirement will let they rest a little bit and won’t risk overuse injuries from repetitive motions. Secondly, they will have some spare time to explore other interests such as travelling, gardening or simply playing with their grand children. For example, my father is planning to retire early at 55 year old just to have a chance to finally learn how to play guitar for the first time.
On the other hand, in my opinion, some people will benefit greatly from working post 60 year old. This is especially true for people that want to keep their cognition intact as they won’t risk memory loss from under-stimulated brains. By keep thinking and trying to solve problems, they actively stimulate their cerebral cortex which, in turn, acts as a natural defense against aging process. My workaholic grandfather is a great example for this case. He is over 70 year old but he is still so sharp that would rival even those in their twenties because he keeps his brain exercising via complex quizzes almost daily.
In conclusion, even though I agree early retirement is suitable for some types of people, working after 60 year old still have some tremendous benefits that should not be taken lightly.
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