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vuanhkhoaas
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March 15, 2020 at 10:49 pm
[3/15/2020, 10:49:11 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!
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March 17, 2020 at 10:29 pm
Hi bạn,
Vấn đề bài của bạn là cách giải quyết đề không thực sự đi vào trọng tâm. Mở bài quá dài, thân bài đoạn thứ 3 khá khó hiểu. Ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ của bạn cũng đôi lúc gây khó khăn cho người đọc. Bạn xem nhận xét, có gì thắc mắc thì hỏi mình nhé.
Chúc bạn học tốt!
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