• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • maiphuong01

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      June 26, 2018 at 11:32 am

      [6/26/2018, 11:32:48 AM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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      Nowadays a large amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
      In recent years, children increasingly become the target of many companies and appear in the commercial advertisement of such firms, exerting negative effects on children. Thus, some people argue that these advertisements should be banned. However, I do believe that these unwanted effects can be controlled, and this kind of advertising still brings several benefits to the society.
      On the one hand, there are some reasons why many people suppose the prohibition of chosing chlidren as a target market to introduce products. Firstly, most of such advertisements attract children by colourful imagines and funny scenes but do not give enough informations to their young customers. As the young are inexperienced, they easily believe fully in advertisements, so they will insist parents to buy those products without knowing that some harmful toys and unhealthy food can affect negatively on their lives. Secondly, many products on advertisemens are unnecessary that cost parents much of money to satisfy their children.
      On the other hand, it can be denied that advertisements aiming at children bring some benefits. Thanks to this kind of advertising, parents may have more choices when they choose a product for their children. For example, there are variety types of diapers and milk that are come from many different brands. When parents choose the most suitable thing for their children, this will make a competition betweens companies about the price and the quality. As the results, national economic system will take advantages from this competition. Besides, the products for children are usually guided detailedly for users on advertisements that provides practical visualized experience to parents, helps them know how to use these kinds of products.
      In conclusion, it is certainly true that advertising aiming at children may have some negative effects but it still has many advantages for human life. Thus, such advertising should not be banned.

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    • truongminhtri210595

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      June 27, 2018 at 10:21 pm

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