Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
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2. Some people say that parents should control their children’s behavior from a very young age. What do you think?
Parents have a significant influence on their children. Some people argue that offspring’ behavior should be controlled by their parents when they are toddlers. I agree with this statement and in this essay, I will give my reasons for this argument.
I personally side with the view that parents, who are experienced people with deep knowledge should be the one who teach their children what is right and wrong. What I mean is in very young age, the offspring have immature awareness that they just act in the ways the love, with superficial thinking and knowledge. So, they do not know this is true and that is wrong. This can lead to the fact that they can easily get into troubles and behave themselves in wrong ways. This is the reason why they need some advice from adults to fix their behaviors. Furthermore, adults have extremely important impacts to the thinking, attitudes and actions of their sons and daughters. So, with the help of parents, the children not only behave the way which suit the standard of the society, but also are respected and become a great example for other people.
However, controlling children’s behavior is different from over controlling them. This is because, over controlling is negative as if the kids are managed strictly, those young people might not have creativity, passions and ambitions in the future. I mean, they may always ought to ask their parents what to do and how to do it, but not find the solutions by themselves. In another word, they might become independent. For instance, when my cousin was young, he always let his parents to teach him clearly and directly everything, even his career was his parents’ dream, not his own passion, so he work with a boring attitude, every time feel tired. This happen because he do not have any desire in that job, and he even can not think of any dream jobs since he is too passive.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that mothers and fathers, who are extremely easy to teach their offspring, should only provide the kids some advice, not manage the kids’ lives, just give them freedom to enjoy and grow up with dependence.Chúc bạn học tốt, feedback bài chữa bạn comment ở đây giúp mình nhé
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