• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • lethimytran2003

      Participant
      June 13, 2019 at 9:18 pm

      [6/13/2019, 9:19:30 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!

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      Many students have to study subjects which they do not like. Some people think this is a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.
      Education plays a significant role for humanity. Some people argued that it is completely waste students’ time if they learn subjects that they do not enjoy. While I think this statement is true, I do not fully agree with it and in this essay, I am going to express my opinion about this argument.
      No one can deny the fact that if students learn a variety of fields, they will be able to widen their knowledge. They are taught a large number of new amazing things every day, ranging from science such as mathematics, physics, chemistry to social knowledge to how to be better in being a human. These things, actually, can turn to be students’ skills in the future. For instance, we are taught about our bodies and how to eliminate diseases in biology, so then we might know some precaution methods to keep fit.
      However, I side with the view that if students do not interested in subjects they learn, it may take their time wastefully. This is because when they have to study those subjects, they not only easily get bored and have a feeling of tired, but also can be “allergy” to those fields, and then, they probably hate the teachers. As a result, they cannot absorb the knowledge they have learned. In other words, if the students just students which they passionate about, they may have more time and opportunities to express all their abilities. They may study by their heart and exert all their strengths to become better, so they might be seniors in their favorite fields, and even in their dream jobs afterward.
      In conclusion, I strongly believe that students should study all school subjects, even when they do not enjoy, but they should not spend much time for every fields. They should focus on their major and subjects which they have passion on and use knowledge of the others as references and second – hand skills.

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    • congthanh

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      June 15, 2019 at 6:58 pm

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