• Chữa Writing 911

    ivynguyen updated 7 years, 11 months ago 3 Members · 3 Posts
    • Trinh

      Participant
      August 24, 2017 at 5:47 pm

      Recently, young generations in community are less happy, although they are richer, safer and healthier. What are the causes? What measures should we take?

      Nowadays, the youths in the society are no longer as happy as they were in the past inspite of their wealth, safety and healthy improvements. There are numerous grounds related to this trend, and steps should be taken to tackle the problems.
      As the adults feel less satisfied with their life, several reasons can be anticipated. First and formost, this is because of the technological advancements in recent years. Thus, the young generations may obtain countless opportunities to get access to the Internet, which obviously prevents them from the face-to-face communication. As a result, they are unlikely to contact with the outdoor life, which brings about natural joyfulness. Secondly, it is the incredible pressure of studying at school that deprives the youths of gaining happiness. For instance, besides studying at school, every student is responsible for doing their homework on a daily basis. Therefore, no more leisure activities are allowed in their days.
      The governments should take various actions to solve the problems described above. Firstly, the youth should be encouraged to participate in some organisations as a way for them to either acquire some valuable experience or have fun with the others. For example, working as a volunteer may assist adults to meet new accquantances and make friends rather than glue their eyes to the screen. Furthermore, schools should eliminate the irrelevent subjects to lighten the students’ workload and hold more extra-activities at school. This may allow the young generations to relieve their stress and focus more on their main subject for the best results.
      In conclusion, measures should be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as the youths are being unhappy with their current life.

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    • anna229112

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      August 26, 2017 at 7:09 pm

      [13:09:49, 26/8/2017] Cám ơn các bạn!

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    • ivynguyen

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      August 27, 2017 at 5:34 pm

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