• Chữa bài IELTS Task 2

    • thaomai.0918

      Participant
      January 19, 2018 at 11:10 pm

      Name: Mai Thu Thảo

      Level of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the
      world. What are the reason for this and suggest some solutions

      Task

      It can be undeniable that youth criminals are climbing to a dramatic high
      number in our society. This makes negative impacts on safety of people’s
      life and requires urgent measures from adults and government to tackle this
      reality.

      Regarding reasons that cause juvenile delinquent, it is obvious that the
      youth these day makes more mistakes because of some reasons which are
      related to the poor life and addiction of violent film or obscene material.
      With regard to the poor life, when living in an insufficient circumstance,
      it is really easy for young people to do offences such as pickpocketing,
      shoplifting to meet their needs. Furthermore, poor teenagers are not often
      well-educated enough to recognize what are good or bad things. Hence, they
      are easily tempted by people who have illegal purposes. As far as addiction
      is concerned, there are so many violent movies and depraved culture on the
      internet, which are destroying a young generation that become addictive
      this kind of films. As a result, teenagers can be more aggressive and they
      want to imitate what happens in the movies. They may be confused between
      the real life and virtual world. This leads to they can lose a sense of
      what they do and become a criminal. Therefore, poverty and film addiction
      are extremely dangerous to the youth.

      To tackle this problem, both government and parents have responsibilities
      to reduce the rate of criminals in juvenile people. A clear solution to
      this situation comes from teenagers’ parents. They should spend more time
      on their children instead of earning money because children on this age are
      really sensitive and they need more care from their parents. Concerning
      young people can help parents find out strange expressions and prevent
      juvenile offenders early. Last but not least, governments also have a
      crucial play in addressing this problem. They need to have policies that
      expand all of people can access to a good education. Actually, poor people
      need to be educated completely to escape from impoverishment and become
      helpful citizens for community.

      To sum up, there is no doubt young criminals are increasing significantly
      because of poverty and film addiction. In my view, governments and parents
      need to offer urgent methods to handle this issue.

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    • Huong Trang

      Participant
      January 21, 2018 at 9:50 am

      [09:50:09, 21/1/2018] Cám ơn các bạn!

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