Chữa bài IELTS Task 2
Name: Mai Thu Thảo
Level of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the
world. What are the reason for this and suggest some solutionsTask
It can be undeniable that youth criminals are climbing to a dramatic high
number in our society. This makes negative impacts on safety of people’s
life and requires urgent measures from adults and government to tackle this
reality.Regarding reasons that cause juvenile delinquent, it is obvious that the
youth these day makes more mistakes because of some reasons which are
related to the poor life and addiction of violent film or obscene material.
With regard to the poor life, when living in an insufficient circumstance,
it is really easy for young people to do offences such as pickpocketing,
shoplifting to meet their needs. Furthermore, poor teenagers are not often
well-educated enough to recognize what are good or bad things. Hence, they
are easily tempted by people who have illegal purposes. As far as addiction
is concerned, there are so many violent movies and depraved culture on the
internet, which are destroying a young generation that become addictive
this kind of films. As a result, teenagers can be more aggressive and they
want to imitate what happens in the movies. They may be confused between
the real life and virtual world. This leads to they can lose a sense of
what they do and become a criminal. Therefore, poverty and film addiction
are extremely dangerous to the youth.To tackle this problem, both government and parents have responsibilities
to reduce the rate of criminals in juvenile people. A clear solution to
this situation comes from teenagers’ parents. They should spend more time
on their children instead of earning money because children on this age are
really sensitive and they need more care from their parents. Concerning
young people can help parents find out strange expressions and prevent
juvenile offenders early. Last but not least, governments also have a
crucial play in addressing this problem. They need to have policies that
expand all of people can access to a good education. Actually, poor people
need to be educated completely to escape from impoverishment and become
helpful citizens for community.To sum up, there is no doubt young criminals are increasing significantly
because of poverty and film addiction. In my view, governments and parents
need to offer urgent methods to handle this issue.Attachments:
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