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Thanks for your explaining ! It’s nice!
Sorry , I cannot find your grade for my task , I just see “Z” for all five assessment. What does “Z” mean ?
Dear Veteran,
Thanks for your correcting my task 1 writing.
I feel disappointed with your model answer. Why do you give me the model answer including so many mistakes like that ?
1. I think it must be ” In the Czech Republic , on an average 132 liters of beer were consumed in 2005 and that caused the highest number of alcohol-related deaths in this country ( about 1,369,000 deaths)”. What is the role of ” were consumes in 2005″ in the model ?
2. There is no meaning in the phrase : “caused the second highest death in this country”
3. Why the simple present tense is used in this sentence ” though Canadian people consumes comparatively less….” while the given data is in the year 2002 or 2005 ?
4. Is there any repetition here ” less quantity of beers per person on an average than the later…” ?
5. Can we use beers in plural noun or liters of beer , quantity of beer ?
Best regards,
Thanks for your help !
I like your writing task as sample but there are two points I do not agree with you . First, ” Male employment rates in Switzerland and Iceland was ….. (were ?) . Second, In this year , the similar figures of about 59% Australian and American males was ….(were ?)
By the way, what do you mean in grade <z> ?
