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ad oi link https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R67l5N0f_S cung die roi a, nho ad check lai, tks ad nhieu
Dear ad, mình thấy bài của mình được mark là đã assign khá lâu rồi mà vẫn chưa thấy bài chữa. nhờ ad kiểm tra lại hộ mình với nhé, tks ad
I have posted the wrong essay. You donot need to correct it, sorry for the inconvenience
Tks so much.
I got your point, tks so much
Tks Tran Nguyen so much for your correction.
Could you please help me to explain in details. In the introduction, I already stated that I accept there are some positive effects, I believe the negative consequences are more significant, and in the conclusion I only reaffirm my idea. However, your comment is that my opinion is only stated in the conclusion. Furthermore, with the question is this a positive or negative development, should I write about both positive and negative effects or just write one-side. tks so much