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Hiện tại IP tạm ngưng chữa bài bằng hình. Bạn có thể upload lại file word của bài writing này ngay tại post này để được góp ý. Mong bạn thông cảm vì sự bất tiện này.

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[24/11/2017, 19:59:13] Cám ơn các bạn!

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[24/11/2017, 19:59:04] Cám ơn các bạn!

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1. Please use words next time
2. About your score:

– Task achievement: 7
* You addressed the requirements of the task
* Ideas could be further developed for higher band score
– Coherence and cohesion: 6
* Ineffective use of cohesive devices
* Logically organises information and ideas; there is clear progression throughout
– Lexical resource: 7
* used a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision
* Used less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation
* Several errors in word choice or phrase formation
– Grammatical Range and accuracy: 6
* Mix of complex and simple structures
* Some structures were inaccurate

Overall: 6.5

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Okay suggestion for that part: To be more active in travelling, I usually use my motorbike to commute. Besides, the bus station is a long way from my apartment. By the time I reach it, it will have been evening already. (insert a joke if you feel like it, smile as well)

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The question 2 was: 2. What’s the most popular means of transportation in your hometown? And there was no part that mentioned or answered this question. Please check again.

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