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Chào bạn, do mình không hiểu là bạn đang muốn viết cho task 2 ielts hay chỉ là sửa bài viết đơn giản về điện thoại, nên mình chỉ đưa ra những góp ý dựa trên bài viết của bạn. Hi vọng nó giúp ý cho bạn.

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