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[09:07:20, 21/12/2018] Cám ơn các bạn!
[09:00:03, 21/12/2018] Cám ơn các bạn!
your essay is good. You should improve your grammar and pay attention to the uses of Noun more.
your essay is good. You should improve your grammar and pay attention to the uses of Noun more.
Your ideas are good.
Try to improve vocabulary and grammar[23:17:10, 20/12/2018] Cám ơn các bạn!
You should re-study about article.
Try to improve vocabulary and grammarYou should re-study about article.
Try to improve vocabulary and grammarYou should re-study about article.
Try to improve vocabulary and grammarPay more attention to basic vocabulary and grammar
Pay more attention to basic vocabulary and grammar
Try to improve vocabulary and grammar.
Try to improve vocabulary and grammar.
you should re-study about Noun (plural, singular, countable and uncountable)
you should re-study about Noun (plural, singular, countable and uncountable)
Try to improve coherence and cohesion
Try to improve coherence and cohesion
Overall, your essay is very good. You should chose vocabulary more carefully.
Overall, your essay is very good. You should chose vocabulary more carefully.
Pay more attention to coherence and cohesion (read more sample and try to understand why they can present their ideas clearly)
Pay more attention to coherence and cohesion (read more sample and try to understand why they can present their ideas clearly)
Pay more attention to grammar (the uses of some basic tenses) and vocabulary
Pay more attention to grammar (the uses of some basic tenses) and vocabulary.
Your essay is good, there are just some minor mistakes. Keep moving forward.
Your essay is good, there are just some minor mistakes. Keep moving forward.
Your essay is good, there are just some minor mistakes. Keep moving forward.
Your essay is good, there are just some minor mistakes. Keep moving forward.
