[Phung Nhu Thao]

Hi,
Thank you so much. ^_^

[Phung Nhu Thao]

Yeah, there are 2 mistakes that I can see in your corrected essays.
First, I did not lack of introduction, but my introduction is not good. It is better if you can revised it and improve it. Furthermore, I do not think I need to say which country has the highest rate or the lowest since it is not necessary in the introduction.
Second, male and female are countable noun so you must correct my essay by adding (s)

Please reply if you have any questions.
Best regards,
Thao

[Phung Nhu Thao]

Thank you for your help.

[Phung Nhu Thao]

Tks so much for your comments

[Phung Nhu Thao]

Thanks so much for your helpful comments.
Nice day.

[Phung Nhu Thao]

Dear Thuy,
Thank you for your comment. However, can you give me specific grammar errors in my essay, I cannot find it by meself but I need to see them to improve, hope to receive your response. Thanks so much.
Regards,
Thao

[Phung Nhu Thao]

Dear Chau,
I got what you mean, thanks so much for your support.
Warm regards,
Thao

[Phung Nhu Thao]

Hi Chau,
Thank you so much for your comments, I learnt a lot from them.
However, I just have a question, since my essay is a discuss essay so should I give my stand point in it or just discuss. Hope to receive your response.
Have a nice day.
Thao

[Phung Nhu Thao]

Cảm ơn bạn nhiều nhé.

[Phung Nhu Thao]

Ad cho mình hỏi file mp3 “VOCABULARY” của bài line graph ở đâu vậy?
Mình đã start course nhưng không thấy, mình chỉ thấy hai file như hình chụp màn hình bên dưới.