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1. Hmm, trong trường hợp này mình xem lại thì có thể bạn đúng. Chỗ đó có thể dùng could được.

2. Không ai dùng PUSH cho IMAGINATION cả bạn. Bạn có thể google “PUSH IMAGINATION” và “ELEVATE IMAGINATION” để kiểm tra rằng cái 1 sẽ không có kết quả bạn muốn nhưng cái 2 lại có. Cái 1 nếu có thì bạn phải viết là: “PUSH THE LIMITS OF IMAGINATION”

3. Split time không phải là từ tốt nhất bạn nên dùng ở đây. “Quản lý thời gian giữa 2 việc” sẽ tốt hơn là bạn viết
“chia thời gian cho 2 việc”. Đây là ý kiến của mình để làm bài tốt hơn, về nghĩa thì bạn không sai ở đây.

Hy vọng bạn hiểu ý mình.

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First, you have to master common words and grammar first. Grammar is easy to master, just pay attention to details, analyze the sentence to decide which is the main element.

Meanwhile, read a lot, watch and listen a lot. Read to learn author’s writing style, writing flow. Listen to create a habit in using word. All these are to create ENGLISH ENVIRONMENT. I spent 3 years watching cartoons, reading books to improve my skill.

When you master grammar through careful review and practices, only then you want to improve your vocabulary. Grammar does have a limit, but vocabulary does not. At this stage, you need to research vocabulary intensively, their meaning, their part of speech, synonyms, antonyms, how they’re gonna be in a sentence, whether they’re formal or informal, whether they are academic words or forbidden idioms.

That’s my way, long but steady.

I know my advice is quite generic but, hey, it took me 6 years to do all those stuffs. My best advice is keep practicing, don’t be ashamed of your mistakes, we’re here to help.

“Mistakes are proves for your willingness to improve. If you don’t make them, it’s a sign of pure ignorance”

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