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1. The government should launch campaigns to encourage people to protect
the environment. For example, the authorities should advise
individuals to go to work by bikes, which would reduce the amount of
exhausted fumes.
1. The government should launch campaigns such as using public
transportation instead of private vehicles to encourage people to
protect the environment.
2. People can use technology to recycle materials. For example, solar or
wind power can be used to generate electricity.
1. People can use technology to recycle materials such as fossil fuels
or clean water.
3. Eating fast food such as snacks or instant noodles is likely to lead
to serious health problems which are obesity or heart attack.
1. Eating fast food is likely to lead to serious health problems. For
example, eating a great quantity of snacks may increase the chance
of getting chronic diseases such as obesity.
4. People who are poor are more likely to commit crimes. For instance,
due to not having enough money to live, many poor individuals tend to
rob a bank or steal cars.
1. People who are poor are more likely to commit crimes such as
robbing a bank or stealing cars.
5. Producing noise is sometimes considered a type of recreational
activities. For example, rockers tend to use extremely noisy sounds
when composing songs.
1. Producing noise is sometimes considered a type of recreational
activities.
For example, football fans often chant the name of players whenever they
score goals.
6. Many young people want to have children later in order to have more
time to enjoy life. For instance, instead of having babies, young
couples are likely want to spend time on travelling.
1. Many young people want to have children later in order to have more
time to enjoy life. For example, if they have babies early, they
would not have time for travelling or learning new things.
7. Childcare centers have professional staff members who are well-trained
and have good baby sitting skills such as feeding or patience.
1. Childcare centers have professional staff members who are well-
trained and have good baby sitting skills. For instance, a
babysitter knows well how to feed a child, and she or she is
patient to teach children songs
8. In order to encourage people to improve their health, the government
needs to construct sport facilities such as football stadiums or gym
centers or hold sport competitions for individuals to take part in.

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