A famous person

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    Dinh Cong Anh
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    So to begin with, in reply to the initial point of who this person is and I think I would have to opt for the sitting American president – Donald J. Trump.
    Now concerning the matter of why he is famous, I really need to add that he is a prominent policymaker who has been enacting/releasing countless ways out to recover the economy of America and make America great again. Besides that, he is also a billionaire with total properties are around 8 billion dollars.
    Moving onto the business of why I admire this celebrity, and what I ought to stress here is that I have always been a big fan of politics and tackling social drawbacks, and I suppose that Mr. President Donald J. Trump would potentially bring merits to the world. I also do believe that his excellent measures which are being created to cope with hostile nations like China, North Korean and Iran, are the best of both worlds and kill 2 birds with one stone.
    And so finally then, if time permits, in answer to the question of what I would do if I met him, really I should mention that I would never miss the boat to ask him to support Vietnam in innovating our education, economy and healthcare system and I would perhaps need him to help us to build a strong constitution which might be a solid foundation (base) to guarantee the human rights and human nature for our citizens in many years to come.

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    [1/8/2020, 3:07:17 PM] Cám ơn các bạn!

  • #281913

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    Dear examiner,
    Thank you for giving valuable comments.
    I have nothing to complain about your advice.
    However, at the item of lexical resources, you told me that those unnatural structures I should not use. Whereas in contrast, Mat Clark teacher advised us to use those structures because native speakers often use them.
    I am waiting for your answer.

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